04-22-2024, 04:07 AM
Hey Bunx, this is lovely. One thought I had is there are lots of short sentences, some of which might be smoother if they were combined together.
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Friends and Feelings - by Bunx - 04-22-2024, 01:40 AM
RE: Friends and Feelings - by Wjames - 04-22-2024, 04:07 AM
RE: Friends and Feelings - by Bunx - 04-22-2024, 04:23 AM
RE: Friends and Feelings - by busker - 04-22-2024, 07:16 AM
RE: Friends and Feelings - by Bunx - 04-22-2024, 10:42 AM
RE: Friends and Feelings - by Tiger the Lion - 04-22-2024, 01:37 PM
RE: Friends and Feelings - by Bunx - 04-23-2024, 01:11 AM
RE: Friends and Feelings - by Wjames - 06-01-2024, 03:12 AM
RE: Friends and Feelings - by Bunx - 06-01-2024, 02:29 AM
RE: Friends and Feelings - by Bunx - 06-01-2024, 05:08 AM
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