04-21-2024, 02:29 PM
Hey Tranquil, the poem is really good, it doesn't seem like much was lost in translation - I like this part a lot:
Like the ocean was upside down and holding its breath
or I were at the bottom looking up
but cleaner no dying no struggle
between me and the end above
just blue being filled with sunlight
light blue light
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Thanks for sharing.
Like the ocean was upside down and holding its breath
or I were at the bottom looking up
but cleaner no dying no struggle
between me and the end above
just blue being filled with sunlight
light blue light
---
Thanks for sharing.

