03-15-2024, 11:20 AM
(03-15-2024, 03:35 AM)TranquillityBase Wrote: Papaver rhoeasHi TqB,
Her flowers bloom:
the poppy’s
illuminated red flesh
denies winter’s bones.
I agree, this is well done. I do like Duke's 'luminous'. Fits the rhythm of the last two lines. 'Her' makes me realize I need to research the title!
This is good.
Bryn

