Papaver rhoeas
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(03-15-2024, 03:35 AM)TranquillityBase Wrote:  Papaver rhoeas

Her flowers bloom:
the poppy’s
illuminated red flesh
denies winter’s bones.
Hi TqB,
I agree, this is well done.  I do like Duke's 'luminous'.  Fits the rhythm of the last two lines.  'Her' makes me realize I need to research the title!
This is good.
Bryn
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Papaver rhoeas - by TranquillityBase - 03-15-2024, 03:35 AM
RE: Papaver rhoeas (was Poppy) - by dukealien - 03-15-2024, 09:21 AM
RE: Papaver rhoeas (was Poppy) - by brynmawr1 - 03-15-2024, 11:20 AM
RE: Papaver rhoeas (was Poppy) - by brynmawr1 - 03-15-2024, 09:18 PM



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