02-29-2024, 03:42 AM
(02-28-2024, 02:09 PM)brmccb Wrote: Everything is frozen.Hello BRM, and welcome to the site.
We stood here for a long time.
I walk away first.
I would start by ditching the punctuation. There also seems to be conflict in tense. I will illustrate below.
Everything was frozen
We stood there for a long time--
I walked away first