Cold Currents (was Winter Current)

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Cold Currents (was Winter Current)

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02-18-2024, 06:56 AM

“Lost” is quite generic and doesn’t follow from the sea references

Float, go adrift, etc - these do

Maybe a better choice of word is needed

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RE: Winter Current - by busker - 02-18-2024, 06:56 AM

RE: Winter Current - by RiverNotch - 02-19-2024, 06:31 PM

RE: Winter Current - by rowens - 02-19-2024, 10:28 PM

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