Vale of Vacancies - edit
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Hi duke,
better for changing L3, but not sure it adds anything that isn't inferable from L2. Given your (FEMA) explanation I wonder if you're not missing a trick by alluding to some natural disaster, or other? Also, I thought the roadside image a bit more engaging than 'fall grass'.

Pink portapotties
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waiting for the flood.


Best, Knot


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Messages In This Thread
Vale of Vacancies - edit - by dukealien - 01-29-2024, 06:16 AM
RE: Vale of Vacancies - by busker - 01-30-2024, 10:41 AM
RE: Vale of Vacancies - by Tiger the Lion - 01-30-2024, 11:20 AM
RE: Vale of Vacancies - edit - by dukealien - 01-30-2024, 11:03 PM
RE: Vale of Vacancies - edit - by Knot - 01-31-2024, 12:01 AM
RE: Vale of Vacancies - edit - by dukealien - 01-31-2024, 06:42 AM
RE: Vale of Vacancies - edit - by Knot - 01-31-2024, 10:20 PM
RE: Vale of Vacancies - edit - by dukealien - 01-31-2024, 11:03 PM
RE: Vale of Vacancies - edit - by Knot - 02-01-2024, 12:09 AM



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