January Oracle (edit)

Hello There, Guest! Register

WILL ALL MEMBERS PLEASE GIVE FEEDBACK BEFORE POSTING A POEM IN ANY OF THE MAIN WORKSHOPS.

January Oracle (edit)

TranquillityBase Offline

Offline

Maybe Wizard

Posts: 894
Threads: 176
Joined: Jan 2021

#8

01-26-2024, 10:38 AM

(01-26-2024, 10:03 AM)brynmawr1 Wrote: Addendum. I like Knot's arrangement. Ending with closing the book has a nice finality. I think you can effectively merge the two, ie bring in the specialist and keep Knot's progression. That's your homework! Easier being the 'teacher' than the student. When in doubt, listen to Knot!

FYI, I am trying to work the specialist back in. I agree about Knot's version. Appreciate everybody's comments!

Reply

« Next Oldest | Next Newest »

Messages In This Thread

January Oracle (edit) - by TranquillityBase - 01-14-2024, 03:31 AM

RE: January Oracle (new title) - by TranquillityBase - 01-25-2024, 01:03 AM

RE: January Oracle (new title) - by brynmawr1 - 01-25-2024, 06:29 AM

RE: January Oracle (new title) - by TranquillityBase - 01-26-2024, 09:07 AM

RE: January Oracle (new title) - by CRNDLSM - 01-25-2024, 11:00 AM

RE: January Oracle (new title) - by Knot - 01-26-2024, 03:09 AM

RE: January Oracle (new title) - by brynmawr1 - 01-26-2024, 10:03 AM

RE: January Oracle (new title) - by TranquillityBase - 01-26-2024, 10:38 AM

RE: January Oracle and Redoubt (edit) - by TranquillityBase - 01-27-2024, 12:48 AM

RE: January Oracle and Redoubt (edit) - by Knot - 01-27-2024, 03:56 AM

RE: January Oracle and Redoubt (edit) - by TranquillityBase - 01-28-2024, 03:54 AM

RE: January Oracle and Redoubt (edit) - by brynmawr1 - 01-28-2024, 08:51 AM

RE: January Oracle and Redoubt (edit) - by Knot - 01-28-2024, 10:19 PM

RE: January Oracle (edit) - by busker - 02-17-2024, 11:22 PM

RE: January Oracle (edit) - by TranquillityBase - 02-18-2024, 04:04 AM

RE: January Oracle (edit) - by rowens - 02-19-2024, 10:59 PM

Users browsing this thread: 1 Guest(s)