70's Love Song(edit)

[brynmawr1]

Tonight, on the menu
Chicken & Dijon
Pan Sauce with Brussel
Sprouts and Apple Rice,
a Blue Apron recipe. 
 
Only Tuesday night, already the wife’s Maybe "again" instead of "already"?     Yes
been working late, she’s up 
getting a hot bath. Rod Stewart’s
down on the Sonos singing
“Have I told you lately
that I love you?” 
 
I’ve got the rice started, watching
to be sure it doesn’t boil over I like the mirror image of the hot bath and boiling water.
before I can get the Brussel sprouts on
trying to keep the cut side down
but they keep flipping like turtles.
 
The hard way I’ve learned I can’t "The hard way I've learned" sort of sounds like Yoda speak to me - I think you can make it better.  Right, you are
add the garlic too soon
or it will burn. Then the puppy
comes with her ravaged bear
(remember my heart)
on generation three or four
to play tug-o-war incessantly
the rice tries to overheat. Going from the previous line to this one is a bit awkward. I think you could keep the same structure but connect the images in a cleaner way, i.e          fancy enjambment resist I can't

"playing tug-o-war alone,
rice trying to overheat."
 
Periodically, the fire must be
stoked, fresh wood added This is nice - the fire adds a lot to the image, makes me think of a wood stove.
or it dwindles.  The melancholy
of the mandolin playing
 
in time with my chopping, I can’t
help singing along,
“You are my breath should I grow old
you are my lover, you’re my best friend…”
 
now the sprouts are browned and covered
to keep them warm, apples cubed I'd cut "them".      Yes, again
and added to the rice, the chicken
 
cooked and set aside for a needed rest
to plump and recover their juices; To me ear, "its" reads better than "their" because chicken is more singular than plural to me. I think "their" would be better if you added "breast" after chicken two lines above to make it more plural.     AND again!
 
the sauce of Dijon, brown sugar, soy
and apple cider vinegar added
to the pan of fond, heated scraping I really like "the pan of fond".
until slightly thickened then crème fraiche 
whisked in off heat.  I take care plating- This stanza is lovely.
 
Then there she is hair wet and curled,
nothing but robe and appetite.  

I think you can improve on "then there she is", or remove it.  i.e
"her hair is wet and curled
as she "input action",
nothing but robe and appetite." 

I really like "nothing but robe and appetite" to end.

Hey Bryn, there's lots of great images complimenting each other here, I like it a lot.

Hey Wjames,
Thanks for coming by to give such helpful comments.  I will make edits as indicated.  One question I have is whether the quotes from the song really work or are just meh.
thanks again,
bryn