Sijo
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(01-20-2024, 06:08 AM)brynmawr1 Wrote:  Funny, you picked out the two words I wrangled with the most.  I like the connotation of 'apart' but was leaning toward something more anthropomorphic.  How about 'stand witness'?
I think you got something there ("witness" I mean).  Give you an added suject rhyme in the last line too.

Will be curious how you land on the vs their.
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Sijo - by brynmawr1 - 01-19-2024, 11:54 PM
RE: Sijo - by TranquillityBase - 01-20-2024, 02:37 AM
RE: Sijo - by brynmawr1 - 01-20-2024, 04:04 AM
RE: Sijo - by TranquillityBase - 01-20-2024, 04:25 AM
RE: Sijo - by brynmawr1 - 01-20-2024, 06:08 AM
RE: Sijo - by TranquillityBase - 01-20-2024, 08:06 AM
RE: Sijo - by brynmawr1 - 01-20-2024, 10:15 AM
RE: Sijo - by TranquillityBase - 01-20-2024, 11:36 PM
RE: Sijo - by brynmawr1 - 01-21-2024, 04:56 AM



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