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Hey Bryn,

Thanks for stopping by.  It's been quiet here....  and where's Rowens?  It's kind of creeping me out.

But as to the (I hesitate to call it a poem) poetic dialogue:  it dates from 1981 though I've never shown it to anyone before.  I did do some editing, but not much.  Back then I was heavy into Samuel Beckett and this was inspired by his writing, though he never wrote anything quite this obscure.  But I wanted to have random words that would still carry the tone of a logical conversation, even an emotional one (the last part).  I think.  Hard to go back and reconstruct, I just know I never tried it again.

Sorry I have no explanation for the title; suspect I was just playing with typography.

I really do appreciate that you appreciate it   Thumbsup
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It has been quiet.  I am guilty going into stalker mode myself lately.  Regarding the poem comment above, one of the things I forgot to mention I liked about this post is that it has a very poetic feel. So I vote poem.

I have to admit, I hadn't heard of Beckett so I found a few of his poems on poetry foundation.  They are quite obscure and, at times, in a jarring way.  By that i mean there are parts that seem straight forward then suddenly go off into the woods.  I'll have to keep reading!

Winter is finally giving us a good snow today.  There is something about watching a good snow.  Like white noise for the eyes.
Take care,
Bryn
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a : blue : c - by TranquillityBase - 01-08-2024, 01:51 AM
RE: a : blue : c - by brynmawr1 - 01-19-2024, 06:30 AM
RE: a : blue : c - by TranquillityBase - 01-19-2024, 09:16 AM
RE: a : blue : c - by brynmawr1 - 01-19-2024, 11:46 PM
RE: a : blue : c - by TranquillityBase - 01-22-2024, 12:42 AM



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