You wear it well

[hestavi]

I really like the colloquial tone of this poem, the rhythm and the rhyme which mostly works. I tend to be sensitive to the usage of rhyme because it needs to be delicate to work, so some lines like   When we finished it, we were happy, we sang it and it didn’t sound bad 
feel a little forced in the rhyme scheme. Otherwise , it tells a tale rather effortlessly and evokes feeling some poignant feelings of nostalgia. 
 we sang