Forgiveness

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 ... it is a mantra of sorts, 

Hi,

This is what I felt reading the poem.  Thus, I wasn't sure anything I could suggest would be of any use, since a mantra is so supremely personal.  I do have one suggestion which is to change the order of the first two stanzas.  It seems to me you would want to forgive others before you can forgive yourself.  This may be one of those personal things that make it a matra for you, so, just a suggestion.

It does come off the tongue as a prayer.

TqB