11-11-2023, 04:30 AM
(11-11-2023, 03:47 AM)CRNDLSM Wrote: 10 focus only on the sound of my houseLove it ! Your originality always astounds me. Even when you write a poem or song I don't relate to, I would be hard pressed to call any of it's construction unoriginal.
9 your legs are getting heavy, your eyelids heavy
8 the sound of my voice takes you deeper
7 deeper and deeper, background noise disappears
6 your hands relax at your side. Deeper and deeper
5 at the very bottom, there's an unwrapped box
4 you're going to put everything in this box
3 all your thoughts, all your worries, your childhood
2 everything to ever exist before this moment
1 when I get to 0 you will wake up, a new person
But was "house" supposed to be "voice?" I tried to let it hypnotize me but I kept thinking house was some kind of autofill typo and couldn't focus.
