But a Sword
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(10-24-2023, 06:18 AM)rowens Wrote:  ........Sylphs swarm around me in the Sun
...............Thoughts are overdoing. 
..............We need to rest and burn
Intriguing - does the switch from first person singular to plural mean to include the sylphs in the burning need?  Or only to include thinkers with the original viewpoint voice?  Hoping this is a beach scene rather than a reference to full incineration.  And the title... as in "I bring not peace...?"
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But a Sword - by rowens - 10-24-2023, 06:18 AM
RE: But a Sword - by dukealien - 10-24-2023, 07:00 AM
RE: But a Sword - by rowens - 10-24-2023, 07:16 AM



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