10-19-2023, 01:22 AM
Thanks for the feedback everyone. I think that the title does need to change to something more specific, but I'm waffling.
The God of the Pentateuch (the first five books of the OT) is portrayed as having quite human-like emotions and is prone to fits of jealous rage. Bloom hypothesizes a single author for those 5 books because of this authorial characteristic. Anyway, that's where my mind is. But, this might all be too niche. Or maybe too broad? It's too something. Anyway, thanks for the thoughts.
Changing the title to see how it changes the reading. Also made some changes in the body of it that Mark suggested.
It's really coming home to me how crap I am at writing love poetry. The first part is just....ick.
Something to workshop, I guess.
The God of the Pentateuch (the first five books of the OT) is portrayed as having quite human-like emotions and is prone to fits of jealous rage. Bloom hypothesizes a single author for those 5 books because of this authorial characteristic. Anyway, that's where my mind is. But, this might all be too niche. Or maybe too broad? It's too something. Anyway, thanks for the thoughts.
Changing the title to see how it changes the reading. Also made some changes in the body of it that Mark suggested.
It's really coming home to me how crap I am at writing love poetry. The first part is just....ick.
Something to workshop, I guess.