10-17-2023, 04:34 AM
Lizzie, thank you for the 'welcome back' and for your feedback. I'll bear in mind 'bonsai' going forward. 
(I feel that 'forewarned' gives the piece a bit of an edge. )
rayheinreich, thank you for you input. Indeed, in your rearrangement the haiku/poem has a different dynamic.
(I feel that 'forewarned' gives the piece a bit of an edge. )rayheinreich, thank you for you input. Indeed, in your rearrangement the haiku/poem has a different dynamic.
Honour the Earth. Without it, we'd be nowhere.