Haiku - Autumn
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(10-14-2023, 09:15 PM)DonMar Wrote:  
Autumn swirls around
my feet, sunsets in the shape
of leaves forewarn me.
My sunset this evening had clouds that could definitely be interpreted
as being leaves.
(At the time they reminded me of cats' heads; but if you're surrounded by
eight cats, every damn thing starts looking like cats.)

And haiku? In my head it makes for a solid five line poem:

autumn
swirls around my feet

sunsets
in the shape of leaves

forewarn me
                                                                                                                a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions
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Haiku - Autumn - by DonMar - 10-14-2023, 09:15 PM
RE: Haiku - Autumn - by Lizzie - 10-16-2023, 02:19 PM
RE: Haiku - Autumn - by rayheinrich - 10-16-2023, 02:30 PM
RE: Haiku - Autumn - by DonMar - 10-17-2023, 04:34 AM



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