10-13-2023, 08:30 PM
Yeah there's something to develop, poems don't need plots, you wrote it and think it's poetic, post it in a critical forum so you can practice what you learned in critiquing others poems, you said you wpuld give it a try. You don't have to be right or wrong, just considerate. By the way did you mean for the poem to be written twice here, one in tiny lettering?
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