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                        that fucking blue flower
                        always a pain in the ass to find

                        sometimes it shrinks to a point so small you can't see it this is the one stanza that doesn't quite fit with the rest, but I still like it.
                        you have to feel for it
                        feel for its sharp point
                        it always cuts your fingers     always, it cuts your fingers

                        and sometimes it blows up so big
                        you mistake it for the sky

                        the red ones and the yellow ones are easy I like these lines, not cause they are dramatic but they clear the path to the next
                        the purple ones are sometimes a bit harder I think makes the line too wishy-washy
                        (it depends on the season)

                        and hell, those white ones don't even bother to hide
                        you can even find them at night
                        (though sometimes they pretend to be the moon)  mistaken for....or some variation of, eg 'I mistake them for', etc.

                        remember when we were flowers?  A little turn here. humanizing, grounding before going back in.
                        when we found each other?  how? doing something with colors here might be interesting. eg 'when we knew our colors', etc.

                        someday
                        (i keep telling myself)   say to....a little rhyme action but might be too cheap for your aesthete.
                        i'll stop this
                        stop looking around corners
                        between lines
                        in cracks
                        under rocks

                        it's a pain in the ass to keep doing this   could be implied
                        but
                        when it gets down to it  I get
                        (in this world at least)  could cut this, but...does add an element of here after dimension.
                        i've nothing else to do makes it a little more poignant, perhaps. or too desperate, you decide.

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image: photograph of Blue Flower - ray

About the Blaue Blume -  Blue Flower

From the Wiki article (see below for link)
A blue flower (German: Blaue Blume) was a central symbol of inspiration for the Romanticism movement, and remains an enduring motif in Western art today.[1] It stands for desire, love, and the metaphysical striving for the infinite and unreachable. It symbolizes hope and the beauty of things.

Early use of the symbol
German author Novalis introduced the symbol into the Romantic movement through his unfinished coming-of-age story, entitled Heinrich von Ofterdingen.[2] After contemplating a meeting with a stranger, the young Heinrich von Ofterdingen dreams about a blue flower which calls to him and absorbs his attention.

Explanation of the symbol
"This blue flower is the watchword and sacred symbol of the [Romantic] school," according to H.H. Boyesen. "It is meant to symbolize the deep and sacred longings of a poet's soul. Romantic poetry invariably deals with longing; not a definite, formulated desire for some obtainable object, but a dim, mysterious aspiration, a trembling unrest, a vague sense of kinship with the infinite, and a consequent dissatisfaction with every form of happiness which the world has to offer."[3] Thomas Carlyle offered this, that the blue flower "being Poetry, the real object, passion and vocation of young Heinrich, which, through manifold adventures, exertions and sufferings, he is to seek and find."[4]

Use of the symbol
Joseph Freiherr von Eichendorff wrote a poem called Die blaue Blume (The blue flower). Adelbert von Chamisso saw the core of Romanticism in the motif, and Goethe searched for the "Urpflanze" or "original plant" in Italy, which in some interpretations could refer to the blue flower. E. T. A. Hoffmann used the Blue Flower as a symbol for the poetry of Novalis and the "holy miracle of nature" in his short tale "Nachricht von den neuesten Schicksalen des Hundes Berganza".

In 1902, Charles Scribner's Sons published The Blue Flower, a collection of short stories by Henry Van Dyke, the first two of which, "The Blue Flower" and "The Source", refer to the blue flower as a symbol of desire and hope, and the object of the narrator's search. This volume also includes Van Dyke's most famous story, "The Other Wise Man".


Blue rose
Walter Benjamin used the image of the blue flower several times in his writing. For example, the opening sentence of his essay Dream Kitsch: "No one really dreams any longer of the Blue Flower. Whoever awakes as Heinrich von Ofterdingen today must have overslept." Also in his Work of Art essay: "The equipment-free aspect of reality has here become the height of artifice, and the vision of immediate reality the Blue Flower in the land of technology."[5]

C. S. Lewis, in his autobiographical book Surprised by Joy, references the "Blue Flower" when speaking of the feelings of longing that beauty elicited when he was a child of six. He associates it with the German word sehnsucht, and states that this intense longing for things transcendent made him "a votary of the Blue Flower."[6]

English writer Penelope Fitzgerald's historical novel The Blue Flower is based on Novalis's early life.[7] In John le Carré's 1968 novel A Small Town in Germany, the character Bradfield says, "I used to think I was a Romantic, always looking for the blue flower" (Pan edition, p. 286 – chap. 17). Substance D, a fictitious drug in Philip K. Dick's 1977 novel A Scanner Darkly, is derived from a plant with blue flower.

more from Wiki article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Blue_flower

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Please feel free to go as off-topic as you want.
I most prize comments that describe what you thought and felt when you were reading
the poem, irrespective of the content of the poem. Also encouraged are off-topic comments
(what you had for breakfast this morning or anything about cats - I live with eight) and poems
that answer the one above (Leanne loved doing that). As well as corrections to grammar,
spelling, and suggestions for improved wording of lines. And yes, it's not lost on me that all
my "poems" aren't poems; they're really multiple-media cuz they contain images as well.

Hi Ray,
I've neglected to stop by and mention how much I enjoyed this piece.  I like the idea of there being a codex of imagery we could use to convey more meaning.  To make the less is more, more.  I have been reading about haiku recently and how in the Japanese tradition there was/is an understood set of conventions to convey seasons, etc.  I did make some suggestions above. You can't hide in miscellaneous!  Hope you find them useful.
Take care,
bryn

PS There is a lot of weird formatting with your post that made it a little hard to interact with.