You wear it well

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When you post in a critique forum, you're asking people to not just read it, but carefully consider it in a manner that will improve it.  Everyone has a unique valid opinion and they don't always agree, the more you put in, the more you will receive.  I mean, the more you critique, and read critique, the better you will be able to apply it to your own works.  If you're interested in improving your works

I’ll give it my best shot