10-10-2023, 09:21 PM
I’m very new to poetry
I’m 72 but been writing poetry just 4 months
therefore i’ve picked this poem for feedback.
If i would have wrote this poem
i would have wrote more stanzas
because i think it has a simple flow to it.
and it seems to be going somewhere
Not sure where as it’s so short.
but i’m not sure of the message ?
like i said i’m very new to the subject
I’m 72 but been writing poetry just 4 months
therefore i’ve picked this poem for feedback.
If i would have wrote this poem
i would have wrote more stanzas
because i think it has a simple flow to it.
and it seems to be going somewhere
Not sure where as it’s so short.
but i’m not sure of the message ?
like i said i’m very new to the subject