09-22-2023, 04:19 AM 
	
	
	(09-17-2023, 01:16 PM)Wjames Wrote: Offer to buy a cigaretteQuick question, WJ. Does "outfront the bar" mean to suggest the man is in a good mood? High spirits? Does it change the poem if the man is approached "outfront the tax office", for example. If they have a fair demeanor I will usually give them 2 or 3. If I don't like their face then I'm the guy in the 2nd strophe.
off a man smoking outfront the bar
for a loonie, and he’ll smile
and give the smoke for free.
Ask the man if you can bum one,
and watch his eyes shift
left and right, before he says
the pack is empty.

 

