31st Birthday

[Lizzie]

Thank you Busker and Lizzie,

I agree about the last line.  I feel like the conversation is too brief.  I'd be curious as to your (or anyone else's) advice about that.  Or is that simple "OK" enough?  But if I made it longer, it would short circuit the following lines.

TqB

It's definitely enough. One of the great tragedies of the piece is the one-sidedness of the relationship. You could always try having that bit be longer and see what everyone thinks; there's really no harm in trying if you feel like you'd always wonder. But, you certainly don't need more, IMO.