31st Birthday
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Thank you Busker and Lizzie,

I agree about the last line.  I feel like the conversation is too brief.  I'd be curious as to your (or anyone else's) advice about that.  Or is that simple "OK" enough?  But if I made it longer, it would short circuit the following lines.

TqB
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31st Birthday - by TranquillityBase - 09-01-2023, 09:04 PM
RE: 31st Birthday - by busker - 09-01-2023, 09:13 PM
RE: 31st Birthday - by Lizzie - 09-02-2023, 12:12 PM
RE: 31st Birthday - by TranquillityBase - 09-02-2023, 07:11 PM
RE: 31st Birthday - by Knot - 09-02-2023, 10:43 PM
RE: 31st Birthday - by Lizzie - 09-03-2023, 01:09 AM



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