Who Are You?

Who Are You?

Mark A Becker Offline

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#12

08-31-2023, 08:19 PM

Much tighter now, Lizzie. The dream-like psychosis is more powerful.
Alice introduced at the ending was a good move, and works much better with mention of the rabbit hole at the beginning.
You found the bones-
Thumbsup

-Mark

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Who Are You? - by Lizzie - 08-18-2023, 01:23 PM

RE: Alice Says - by Mark A Becker - 08-19-2023, 01:51 AM

RE: Alice Says - by Lizzie - 08-19-2023, 09:47 AM

RE: Alice Says - by TranquillityBase - 08-19-2023, 07:32 PM

RE: Alice Says - by Mark A Becker - 08-20-2023, 01:37 AM

RE: Alice Says - by Lizzie - 08-21-2023, 07:04 AM

RE: Alice Says - by Mark A Becker - 08-21-2023, 07:49 AM

RE: Alice Says - by alonso ramoran - 08-22-2023, 08:31 AM

RE: Alice Says - by Quixilated - 08-22-2023, 09:13 AM

RE: Alice Says - by TranquillityBase - 08-29-2023, 08:15 PM

RE: Alice Says - by Lizzie - 08-22-2023, 02:08 PM

RE: Who Are You? - by Mark A Becker - 08-31-2023, 08:19 PM

RE: Who Are You? - by busker - 09-01-2023, 10:10 AM

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