08-27-2023, 12:43 PM
Hi, Thunder. I don't know if you're still here, but I wanted to acknowledge your effort with this one. For me, I'd love to share some thoughts, but I simply can't go through this substantial piece line by line as this forum requires. You might want to consider moving this piece to Mild so that you could get some line by line and people's overall thoughts -- you may get more crits that way. I'd hate to see your work languish here, but I'd crit in a less demanding forum. Also, is there any particular Milton work that you'd suggest brushing up on before critiquing? Hope this finds you.
Lizzie
Lizzie