Draft 5: Shell
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(08-27-2023, 01:53 AM)alonso ramoran Wrote:  The title is a nod to the gas company. I'm wondering if I should re-title as "Shell plc" or if it would be too on the nose.
No, you're good. I should have gotten that.

It also occurred to me after the fact that it could be that the narrator needs to go into their shell to get away from the overstimulating environment. 

Overall, just a failure of imagination on my part.
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Draft 5: Shell - by alonso ramoran - 11-04-2021, 01:22 PM
RE: Shell - by Wjames - 11-05-2021, 08:59 AM
RE: Shell - by Sapphire26855 - 11-06-2021, 02:36 AM
RE: Shell - by Beowulf - 11-06-2021, 05:27 AM
RE: Draft 2: Shell - by alonso ramoran - 11-11-2021, 12:00 PM
RE: Draft 2: Shell - by Knot - 11-12-2021, 09:21 PM
RE: Draft 3: Shell - by s3 - 09-09-2022, 10:53 PM
RE: Draft 3: Shell - by ZHamilton - 09-15-2022, 08:36 AM
RE: Draft 4: Shell - by alonso ramoran - 10-09-2022, 05:04 AM
RE: Draft 4: Shell - by Lizzie - 08-24-2023, 05:06 PM
RE: Draft 5: Shell - by alonso ramoran - 08-27-2023, 01:53 AM
RE: Draft 5: Shell - by Lizzie - 08-27-2023, 03:00 AM



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