Candor
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(08-21-2023, 05:41 AM)rowens Wrote:  Candor


The Earth works,                         don't think you need that final comma
though the Moon's a calendar
ever changing
the day's same round. 

Hints of codes oblige
the armory,
and beasts in white lab coats
entwine their machinations. 

Who can blame Angels, 
being purely what they are,
or Fay, or even                           not sure how you are using "Fay" here; "the Fay" as in the fairies?
the square, blustering 

Demons their fair trial
of a deal, living                    what's the deal?
as we must, then
returning to the ground.

"No," said the little fly
no one listened to 
without 
annoyance, 

"I don't just live a day,
despite what you 
think. And unlike you,
I don't understand the moon."
I very much enjoyed this one, though it contains many mysteries.  I am drawn to it, like the fly.

TqB
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Messages In This Thread
Candor - by rowens - 08-21-2023, 05:41 AM
RE: Candor - by Mark A Becker - 08-21-2023, 06:18 AM
RE: Candor - by Wjames - 08-21-2023, 02:43 PM
RE: Candor - by TranquillityBase - 08-21-2023, 05:31 PM
RE: Candor - by rowens - 08-22-2023, 01:42 AM
RE: Candor - by Lizzie - 08-24-2023, 04:07 PM
RE: Candor - by rowens - 08-25-2023, 12:04 AM



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