08-20-2023, 07:26 PM
(08-20-2023, 01:27 AM)Mark A Becker Wrote: by graceGood morning Mark,
our bodies wear out
the years
the steady tide
of true blood
guides my heart
to your embrace
takes me back
to the exotic
taste of you
again and again
to remind me
who I am
I think you could lose stanza 3 which seems too sweet for me and what remains would be more complete and unique for this reader.
Tim