08-20-2023, 01:37 AM
No need to bin it Lizzie-
Alice's dream-like tale lends itself very well to inspiring a bizarre dream-like poem. If I could remember any of my really weird dreams within five minutes of waking, I would attempt it. But I'm too groggy to even be able to jot them down, and then they're gone... And if I try to re-assemble them I totally jank it up.
That said, there are elements in your poem that could be expanded to great effect. Go for it!
- Mark
Alice's dream-like tale lends itself very well to inspiring a bizarre dream-like poem. If I could remember any of my really weird dreams within five minutes of waking, I would attempt it. But I'm too groggy to even be able to jot them down, and then they're gone... And if I try to re-assemble them I totally jank it up.
That said, there are elements in your poem that could be expanded to great effect. Go for it!
- Mark