early morning apologies (revised, new title)
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Hey Tim-
I love how you open this one:

the neighbors
are sleeping
and might as well be dead,


Really like this part, too:

they are kindly
gossips
that’s their poetry.


Those are my comments, here in MISC,
- Mark
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RE: early morning manifesto - by Knot - 08-18-2023, 11:19 PM
RE: early morning manifesto - by TranquillityBase - 08-19-2023, 06:58 PM
RE: early morning manifesto - by Mark A Becker - 08-19-2023, 03:33 AM
RE: early morning manifesto - by Miley - 08-19-2023, 02:44 PM



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