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[brynmawr1]

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Thanks again to everyone who gave input. Seems to me like the poem could be good, could be bad, or poems in general could be bad. I'm going to have to think about things for a bit before I can figure out what I think.
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Hey OMG,
The poem is good IMO.  It is well conceived and well written.  You have to remember that all of the suggestions are mostly tweaks, some technical and some are each person's personal preferences, as we all have different writing styles, but the poem is successful as originally written.  The hard part is sifting through the comments and picking out what you feel advances what you are trying to do otherwise you end up going down the rabbit hole of trying to fit everyone's suggestions into your poem and it ends up mushy.  I personally find it hard to do.  Buck up buttercup!