08-15-2023, 04:27 PM
Hello, everyone. I've added a spoiler that should help a good deal with clarity. I made an assumption that this phenomenon was well known, so that's my oversight.
Wjames: you mentioned that the mother's addition seemed odd at the end, but she is introduced right off the bat. Did you miss the first part of the poem, or is there just an inappropriately brief introduction? More can be added.
Wjames: you mentioned that the mother's addition seemed odd at the end, but she is introduced right off the bat. Did you miss the first part of the poem, or is there just an inappropriately brief introduction? More can be added.