#dadlife
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(08-12-2023, 01:24 PM)O. M. Geezersnaps Wrote:  Ok, so I reverted back to the original for now. Not negating the possibility of changing it in the future; I've been persuaded by rowens not to be too hasty. 

Thanks again for the feedback.  Thumbsup

~Obadiah Malachi Geezersnaps
O snap!  Am I too late to advocate for "context"?  And would it ruin anything at add another "what's":

"what's context and what's quintessence"

I'm glad you reverted to "in their imagery".

Also, maybe a period after "missed", a new sentence beginning with "Entranced..."

TqB
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#dadlife - by O. M. Geezersnaps - 08-06-2023, 12:23 PM
RE: #dadlife - by rowens - 08-06-2023, 12:55 PM
RE: #dadlife - by TranquillityBase - 08-06-2023, 07:04 PM
RE: #dadlife - by O. M. Geezersnaps - 08-07-2023, 02:15 AM
RE: #dadlife - by TranquillityBase - 08-07-2023, 02:48 AM
RE: #dadlife - by O. M. Geezersnaps - 08-07-2023, 02:50 AM
RE: #dadlife -- revision - by O. M. Geezersnaps - 08-12-2023, 06:47 AM
RE: #dadlife -- revision - by rowens - 08-12-2023, 07:32 AM
RE: #dadlife -- revision - by rowens - 08-12-2023, 12:05 PM
RE: #dadlife - by O. M. Geezersnaps - 08-12-2023, 01:24 PM
RE: #dadlife - by TranquillityBase - 08-12-2023, 06:51 PM
RE: #dadlife - by O. M. Geezersnaps - 08-13-2023, 04:12 AM
RE: #dadlife - by O. M. Geezersnaps - 08-13-2023, 06:30 AM
RE: #dadlife - by TranquillityBase - 08-13-2023, 07:30 PM
RE: #dadlife - by Mark A Becker - 08-14-2023, 03:01 AM
RE: #dadlife - by rowens - 08-15-2023, 03:27 AM
RE: #dadlife - by Wjames - 08-15-2023, 08:51 AM
RE: #dadlife - by O. M. Geezersnaps - 08-15-2023, 12:59 PM
RE: #dadlife - by brynmawr1 - 08-15-2023, 09:14 PM
RE: #dadlife - by O. M. Geezersnaps - 08-16-2023, 01:05 AM



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