08-12-2023, 06:51 PM
(08-12-2023, 01:24 PM)O. M. Geezersnaps Wrote: Ok, so I reverted back to the original for now. Not negating the possibility of changing it in the future; I've been persuaded by rowens not to be too hasty.O snap! Am I too late to advocate for "context"? And would it ruin anything at add another "what's":
Thanks again for the feedback.
~Obadiah Malachi Geezersnaps
"what's context and what's quintessence"
I'm glad you reverted to "in their imagery".
Also, maybe a period after "missed", a new sentence beginning with "Entranced..."
TqB

