08-12-2023, 12:05 PM
I like the words vital and fluid, and the rhythm and punctuation of the first two stanzas of your poem.
I have my own symbols and nuances of rhythm and rhyme. So, what I say, as poet and critic, is based on my poetics.
A religion.
You can break rules and niceties in your art, if it is art.
But beware the nonsense of other poets' sense.
I have my own symbols and nuances of rhythm and rhyme. So, what I say, as poet and critic, is based on my poetics.
A religion.
You can break rules and niceties in your art, if it is art.
But beware the nonsense of other poets' sense.