08-11-2023, 06:45 PM
Mark and Bryn,
Thank you both for the reads and the comments. There is a message in this bottle
but the bottle is too opaque for the message to be seen. I'm sorely tempted to explain what I was trying to say, but I've been here long enough to know that is the first symptom of a poem that needs more work. I'll see what I can do to clarify it.
Tim
Thank you both for the reads and the comments. There is a message in this bottle
but the bottle is too opaque for the message to be seen. I'm sorely tempted to explain what I was trying to say, but I've been here long enough to know that is the first symptom of a poem that needs more work. I'll see what I can do to clarify it.Tim