05-25-2010, 04:21 AM
Thank you for ur comments, you've got the poem to a T! That is why I could not give it a title. The title would have told the reader what they were about to see. The scene was powerfully God's, powerfully fire in the mud, the beauty took my breath away. I think part of my soul was forever caught in that moment and is out there still in that Reflection. And there is a reflection into oneself in this poem. 