Ruminations on the Sea(more tweaks)

[brynmawr1]

Hi Steve-

I'd go with "Ruminations on the Sea"

This is a brilliant poem. Not to blow smoke, but it is truly fantastic, and worthy of the spotlight.

I will admit that as I read I was nervous that you might blow it, but you brought it ashore wonderfully!

Why you put it in BASIC is beyond me, as this is a superbly polished piece. I'm afraid that any suggestions for changes would only break this one.

Way to go Steve! 
- Mark

Thanks Mark.  I guess I was feeling nervous about it so hid it in BASIC.  I often feel that it is somewhat accidental which poems work out and which don't.
As I told Tim, any success I have is only possible because of your and all the other's generosity of time reading and commenting.
Thanks again,
steve