08-11-2023, 05:43 AM
Hi Steve-
I'd go with "Ruminations on the Sea"
This is a brilliant poem. Not to blow smoke, but it is truly fantastic, and worthy of the spotlight.
I will admit that as I read I was nervous that you might blow it, but you brought it ashore wonderfully!
Why you put it in BASIC is beyond me, as this is a superbly polished piece. I'm afraid that any suggestions for changes would only break this one.
Way to go Steve!
- Mark
I'd go with "Ruminations on the Sea"
This is a brilliant poem. Not to blow smoke, but it is truly fantastic, and worthy of the spotlight.
I will admit that as I read I was nervous that you might blow it, but you brought it ashore wonderfully!
Why you put it in BASIC is beyond me, as this is a superbly polished piece. I'm afraid that any suggestions for changes would only break this one.
Way to go Steve!
- Mark