Sexy Pace

[Lizzie]

I think that this one would be fire written in anapests or dactyls because it has that pounding, galloping feel. What makes this one engaging for me is the specifics: the kind of shoes, the material of the top, the vehicle being driven by Mr. Inappropriate. It has the feel of a power ballad or something people listen to when they want to get hyped. The only thing I don't love is the blare/stare rhyme which feels a little forced. Overall, a fun read.