08-07-2023, 07:30 PM
(08-06-2023, 10:37 PM)brynmawr1 Wrote:Thanks Bryn,(08-06-2023, 07:33 PM)TranquillityBase Wrote: Midnight OilGood morning,
Unnerved
held in check
by science and doubt
seeking the consolation
of a thunderstorm
whose kingdom of rain
erases all pain
kaleidoscoped alarm I verbed it, not sure it's a word but....
assassinates hesitation
sky raptured without
an unlikely wreck maybe better word than 'unlikely'
on a silent curve.
Another good one. Not much to suggest. I bolded my most favoritest parts.
take care,
steve
I've edited it. I got the dreaded red underline for "kalaidoscoped", but I'm ignoring it. We have the inalienable right to coin new words. Although I'm pretty sure I've seen "kalaidoscoped" before.
Thanks for the read and the suggestions; they improved it.
TqB

