08-06-2023, 07:04 PM
(This post was last modified: 08-06-2023, 08:46 PM by TranquillityBase.)
(08-06-2023, 12:23 PM)O. M. Geezersnaps Wrote: The kids are skating solo nowOMG,
and tying their own laces.
I'm left with space a scribbler needs
to study movements, faces,
particularities of scene,
what's vital and quintessence. "quintescent" (?) yeah, it's not a word, but I just made it one
I need a fluid, clear conceit,
evaporated to a resin.
Their skating showed a subtlety
I'd missed, entranced with visions:
I'm shadow in their imagery, "to" (?)
facsimile of presence.
Not crazy about that title but .......
quite beautiful. I'm kind of serious about "quintescent", it should exist.
TqB
P.S. "quintessential" is a word; how about that?