08-06-2023, 04:31 PM
(08-03-2023, 08:14 AM)Lizzie Wrote: Curious Cosmos,I like it as a short poem.
sees its golden seeds dropping,
peeks over the vase.
If you put 'haiku' in the title then you're gonna get freaks like me that'll say it's not.

If you take 'haiku' out of the title then it solves all issues. I would say that in a haiku; cosmos could not be curious, whether it be the flower or the universe. However if it's not a haiku then it works perfectly and it also allows the possibility of ambiguity with Cosmos, which I as a reader want, especially when the Cosmos is curious.
Anyway like I said, I'm a freak
and your link to a picture of a flower is broken
Mark
wae aye man ye radgie
