Silver Lover
#3
Doesn't matter much, but the ofs could give way to something more. But, with a simple and direct poem like this, the ofs can add of themselves. They show you're stating simply how you feel, and not trying to dazzle.




line of silver smile
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Silver Lover - by Mark A Becker - 07-19-2023, 06:34 AM
RE: Silver Lover - by TranquillityBase - 07-20-2023, 09:17 PM
RE: Silver Lover - by rowens - 08-06-2023, 12:34 PM



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