#dadlife
#1
The kids are skating solo now
and tying their own laces.
I'm left with space a scribbler needs
to study movements, faces,

particularities of scene,
what's vital and quintessence.
I need a fluid, clear conceit,
evaporating resin. 

Their skating showed a subtlety
I'd missed, entranced with visions:
I'm shadow in their imagery,
facsimile of presence.

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#dadlife - by O. M. Geezersnaps - 08-06-2023, 12:23 PM
RE: #dadlife - by rowens - 08-06-2023, 12:55 PM
RE: #dadlife - by TranquillityBase - 08-06-2023, 07:04 PM
RE: #dadlife - by O. M. Geezersnaps - 08-07-2023, 02:15 AM
RE: #dadlife - by TranquillityBase - 08-07-2023, 02:48 AM
RE: #dadlife - by O. M. Geezersnaps - 08-07-2023, 02:50 AM
RE: #dadlife -- revision - by O. M. Geezersnaps - 08-12-2023, 06:47 AM
RE: #dadlife -- revision - by rowens - 08-12-2023, 07:32 AM
RE: #dadlife -- revision - by rowens - 08-12-2023, 12:05 PM
RE: #dadlife - by O. M. Geezersnaps - 08-12-2023, 01:24 PM
RE: #dadlife - by TranquillityBase - 08-12-2023, 06:51 PM
RE: #dadlife - by O. M. Geezersnaps - 08-13-2023, 04:12 AM
RE: #dadlife - by O. M. Geezersnaps - 08-13-2023, 06:30 AM
RE: #dadlife - by TranquillityBase - 08-13-2023, 07:30 PM
RE: #dadlife - by Mark A Becker - 08-14-2023, 03:01 AM
RE: #dadlife - by rowens - 08-15-2023, 03:27 AM
RE: #dadlife - by Wjames - 08-15-2023, 08:51 AM
RE: #dadlife - by O. M. Geezersnaps - 08-15-2023, 12:59 PM
RE: #dadlife - by brynmawr1 - 08-15-2023, 09:14 PM
RE: #dadlife - by O. M. Geezersnaps - 08-16-2023, 01:05 AM



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