sweet dream
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sweet dream

from a
distance
faintly
humming
comes a
presence
gently
strumming

passed on
among
my thoughts
your song
is sung
not lost

very slight revision of an old poem.
very loosely modeled on an Italian sonnet, written in monometer.
Accents of octave & sestet are intentionally reversed to imply different voices
near rhymes and spondees applied where needed
Punctuation left out
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sweet dream - by Mark A Becker - 08-05-2023, 02:13 AM
RE: Sweet Dreams - by Tiger the Lion - 08-05-2023, 02:51 AM
RE: Sweet Dreams - by Mark A Becker - 08-05-2023, 05:50 AM
RE: Sweet Dreams - by TranquillityBase - 08-05-2023, 08:49 PM
RE: Sweet Dreams - by Mark A Becker - 08-05-2023, 09:45 PM



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