Haiku -- Curious Cosmos

Haiku -- Curious Cosmos

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08-04-2023, 08:24 AM

Hi Lizzie -

I gotta agree with Paul that titles for haiku are cheating. Why not make the first line the title? Or just 'cosmos'? Or 'curious'?

That said, it's a splendid little poem once I understood what cosmos were.

- Mark

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Haiku -- Curious Cosmos - by Lizzie - 08-03-2023, 08:14 AM

RE: Lavender hair, yellow eye - by Wjames - 08-03-2023, 09:17 AM

RE: Lavender hair, yellow eye - by Lizzie - 08-03-2023, 10:51 AM

RE: Cutting - by brynmawr1 - 08-03-2023, 11:10 AM

RE: Cutting - by TranquillityBase - 08-03-2023, 06:30 PM

RE: Wilted Cutting - by Quixilated - 08-03-2023, 09:38 PM

RE: Wilted Cutting - by Lizzie - 08-04-2023, 02:20 AM

RE: Wilted Cutting - by Tiger the Lion - 08-04-2023, 02:33 AM

RE: Wilted Cutting - by Mark A Becker - 08-04-2023, 08:24 AM

RE: Haiku -- Curious Cosmos - by Lizzie - 08-04-2023, 10:43 AM

RE: Haiku -- Curious Cosmos - by Tiger the Lion - 08-04-2023, 11:57 AM

RE: Haiku -- Curious Cosmos - by TranquillityBase - 08-04-2023, 07:32 PM

RE: Haiku -- Curious Cosmos - by Magpie - 08-06-2023, 04:31 PM

RE: Haiku -- Curious Cosmos - by TranquillityBase - 08-06-2023, 06:54 PM

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