Quietude
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Maybe, night’s
quietude
is right for us.



The comma after Maybe is like a thought before.
Maybe . . . . and the rest is thoughts in process.



Moonlight washes
through the glass,
bathes the grass of
memory’s city


What is your self-criticism of this? There must be a motive.




Florentine. Lawns 
of the dead
in satin bedspreads.
Those also, who are here and gone,
time's odds and ends.
There you live, friend,
across in a villa from the park.


also?



And afterwards,

And and afterwards?


when the moon weeps silently,

when?

my longing knows 
no bounds for thee.
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Messages In This Thread
Quietude - by busker - 07-31-2023, 09:50 AM
RE: Quietude - by TranquillityBase - 07-31-2023, 08:16 PM
RE: Quietude - by Mark A Becker - 07-31-2023, 11:05 PM
RE: Quietude - by alonso ramoran - 08-01-2023, 02:30 AM
RE: Quietude - by brynmawr1 - 08-01-2023, 11:05 AM
RE: Quietude - by rowens - 08-01-2023, 05:39 PM
RE: Quietude - by O. M. Geezersnaps - 08-05-2023, 01:56 PM
RE: Quietude - by busker - 08-08-2023, 12:41 PM
RE: Quietude - by rowens - 08-12-2023, 02:29 PM



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