Small Victory

Small Victory

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07-30-2023, 10:55 AM

(07-30-2023, 01:34 AM)Mark A Becker Wrote: Small Victory

Underneath our boxwood
the fox napped all day long,

and dreamed that life is good
now that our dog is gone.

This is a delightful little poem.
I like the detail of ‘boxwood’ - it grounds the poem in reality.
The last line is a clever reveal.

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Small Victory - by Mark A Becker - 07-30-2023, 01:34 AM

RE: Small Victory - by brynmawr1 - 07-30-2023, 02:03 AM

RE: Small Victory - by Mark A Becker - 07-30-2023, 02:47 AM

RE: Small Victory - by Kynaston Levitt - 07-30-2023, 04:47 AM

RE: Small Victory - by Mark A Becker - 07-30-2023, 05:43 AM

RE: Small Victory - by busker - 07-30-2023, 10:55 AM

RE: Small Victory - by Mark A Becker - 07-30-2023, 09:04 PM

RE: Small Victory - by busker - 07-30-2023, 09:19 PM

RE: Small Victory - by rowens - 08-01-2023, 05:45 PM

RE: Small Victory - by Mark A Becker - 08-02-2023, 03:02 AM

RE: Small Victory - by rowens - 08-02-2023, 03:34 AM

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