April Takes a Walk

[brynmawr1]

Hi bryn.
Nice vignette.

Given you've grand-daughter later you could trim the opening couplet (And isn't 'walks with a shuffle' simply shuffling?)

Late afternoon his shuffling
feet stir the red-gold rustle

But how are the leaves still rustling when it's almost spring, how are they still dry?

Maybe
up ahead. Occasionally she looks ?


Best, Knot


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Thanks Knot.  You make some good points.  This one had pretty much been put to bed and got resurrected.  Not sure how much tinkering I might do.
Steve